Monday, May 4, 2009

First creative Change tell me what you think. The original is a few posts below.

4 comments:

  1. I would say maybe just work on the cutting with the hands. They're a little distorted/pointy/mishappen.

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  2. Maybe you could somehow make the sky a little darker, the lightning makes it seem like it should be more gloomy. I really like the addition of the lightning and the bird. What are the hands reaching for? Maybe you could make that a little more clear. It looks really cool though! :) If you get a chance, could you comment on mine again??

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  3. I agree with the comment about possibly working on your selection of the hands. It is hard to get them just right, but you can see the white outlines a little bit where you didn't cut close enough. Also, maybe you could play with the saturation of the whole picture. It's pretty de-saturated, so I'd be interested to see what it looked like with a little more color. It might take away from the gloomy feeling of the picture, but it could also take it in a whole new direction/ eaning. And isn't that the purpose of change?
    Other than that, it looks really great. You got some photoshop skills, boy :)

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