Maybe you could somehow make the sky a little darker, the lightning makes it seem like it should be more gloomy. I really like the addition of the lightning and the bird. What are the hands reaching for? Maybe you could make that a little more clear. It looks really cool though! :) If you get a chance, could you comment on mine again??
I agree with the comment about possibly working on your selection of the hands. It is hard to get them just right, but you can see the white outlines a little bit where you didn't cut close enough. Also, maybe you could play with the saturation of the whole picture. It's pretty de-saturated, so I'd be interested to see what it looked like with a little more color. It might take away from the gloomy feeling of the picture, but it could also take it in a whole new direction/ eaning. And isn't that the purpose of change? Other than that, it looks really great. You got some photoshop skills, boy :)
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I would say maybe just work on the cutting with the hands. They're a little distorted/pointy/mishappen.
ReplyDeleteMaybe you could somehow make the sky a little darker, the lightning makes it seem like it should be more gloomy. I really like the addition of the lightning and the bird. What are the hands reaching for? Maybe you could make that a little more clear. It looks really cool though! :) If you get a chance, could you comment on mine again??
ReplyDeleteI agree with the comment about possibly working on your selection of the hands. It is hard to get them just right, but you can see the white outlines a little bit where you didn't cut close enough. Also, maybe you could play with the saturation of the whole picture. It's pretty de-saturated, so I'd be interested to see what it looked like with a little more color. It might take away from the gloomy feeling of the picture, but it could also take it in a whole new direction/ eaning. And isn't that the purpose of change?
ReplyDeleteOther than that, it looks really great. You got some photoshop skills, boy :)
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